It was late in the night.
I was working with the various assignments given to me at school . Meanwhile, I was having my earphones on and I was entangled in the sound of music. Then, getting bored of more and more music, I switched off my MP3. I started hearing a sound, an uniform sound. "Was it the sound of wind whizzing past my house?", I thought. Then an afterthought struck me, does wind blow uniformly? Scolding myself for some idiotic thinking, I left it. But my ears couldn't escape that sound, that uniform, enchanting sound.
I couldn't avoid guessing what it would be. (Was it the thought of my crush? Oops! I don't have one!) Was it my mom who'd left the tap open? (My mom and I were highly prone to unnecessary arguments about this issue that once an argument such as that one stretched for more than 5 hours...). Being busy doing nothing, I tried to guess some other thing.. But, I finally considered that that was the only guess of some sense.. Lazily, I stood up, searched all the rooms to see whether any taps were open.. Nops! I couldn't find any taps open.. Just then, I had a sudden thought of the Adventures of Sherlock Holmes.. Another afterthought again, I said to myself, "Haha! Are you trying to be a detective? You're fit enough only to read those books, bloke!"
But I certainly couldn't avoid that sound... Where was it from???
I searched my house all over again.. Again, same result, nothing of importance.. I wandered around the house, probably a little disappointed. I aimlessly walked around like a hopeless spy remembering Rowan Atkinson in Johnny English.
Suddenly, my eyes were fixed on the window sill, I could see droplets of water hanging on it...
There, it dawned on me, the real reason behind the sound.. I went to the balcony door and opened it.. It was the rain, the belligerent rain, hustling and bustling through the thin air...
My mind had another afterthought, "How the hell did you miss guessing this out."
- Mind it! This is just an imagination. I wanted to give a lively feeling to my thought through my words. Do send in your comments on this topic. And again, I maintain that I don't have a crush! :-)
7 shouts!:
Lovely words man! I was almost in to the scene...great creativity.. Awesome!
kalakkitta kanna
i expect more of this sort from u.
this kind of imaginatory skill s need for an upcoming ............ professional
am sure u will fill the blanks aptly
fantastic..
come out with more things if this calibre
nice... imaginative... but next time u write, do take care of punctuation marks... [I hope u didn't mind me pointing out a small mistake :)]
Gr8, it was almost like something was gonna happen & a good anti-climax... In the end, even I felt as if it was raining outside... Good attempt for a short story... Keep it up!
rain I love the sound of it on the window pane.
good imagination.. bt its obvious.. keep d exagerration low.. :P
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